08-01-2014, 06:24 AM
if you don't get replies on a poem, feel free to bump it after a week , poetry is easy to miss on a site this big.
(08-01-2014, 01:11 AM)poe Wrote: Thanks for you critique. Its funny I've been posting stuff all across the board. I mean of my stuff. This was written in the 1980's when I was about 16. I don't have any precious status for my older piece's, as far as editing's concerned. I will fix her up. Thanks again, Billy