Four Shorts
#6
ajcohen613

I am overwhelmed by the immensity of verbiage, suffocated by leaves, eyes, and crows, while wearing my floral skirt above my head, to avoid sharp plains, and sparks. Smile

If these are separate, then they need to be posted separately, or if a single poem, in a different place. Personally speaking, I think it diminishes each poem to post them this way.

I like number two the best!

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Four Shorts - by ajcohen613 - 07-26-2014, 06:15 PM
RE: Four Shorts - by Dupuis - 07-29-2014, 03:46 AM
RE: Four Shorts - by billy - 07-29-2014, 07:14 PM
RE: Four Shorts - by ajcohen613 - 07-30-2014, 04:08 AM
RE: Four Shorts - by billy - 07-31-2014, 12:16 AM
RE: Four Shorts - by Erthona - 07-31-2014, 09:14 AM



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