07-29-2014, 04:48 AM
(07-29-2014, 03:53 AM)Dupuis Wrote: calm in all its continuityI like the subject matter - a loose thread causing anxiety. Something small having an affect, cool. However, "flickering" seems out of place. There is no mention of light, so what is flickering? Just my thoughts though. This can be easily mended!
a loose thread through time
not taut
so easily slackens into
flickering shapes of
_____________unease
"Where there are roses we plant doubt.
Most of the meaning we glean is our own,
and forever not knowing, we ponder."
-Fernando Pessoa
Most of the meaning we glean is our own,
and forever not knowing, we ponder."
-Fernando Pessoa