07-29-2014, 02:29 AM
Possibly making tow sentences instead of one.
"Tired of writing an unending love poem
on the shredded pre-kindling
that fills my recycling bin. I vowed
to become a novelist."
It works either way, this way just adds more emphasis on the last part. Writer's choice.Regardless it is a nice poem.
Dale
"Tired of writing an unending love poem
on the shredded pre-kindling
that fills my recycling bin. I vowed
to become a novelist."
It works either way, this way just adds more emphasis on the last part. Writer's choice.Regardless it is a nice poem.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.