When the insomniacs & thinkers

[Alexearth]

This piece has a good internal flow. Good use of fresh words. I love.."..orchid sky...journey the celestial moments of higher fields." Is "tighten" a play on Titan? If so its cute I don't know because it seems you've used a verb as an adjective. A wonderful theme, here. Speaking of higher realms. Tell you the truth. I really like this.
Thanks for a beautiful read. I look forward to your next post.
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Poe,

now that you mention it, I think I badly used "tighten" here, the word should be "tightened" and I wanted to express the "deep repetitive style of their heavy breathing"..
Thanks a lot for your comment,


Alex