Failures

[Wjames]

I like this, very successful.

You may want to reconsider your breaks, maybe


Tired of writing an unending love poem
on the shredded pre-kindling
that fills my recycling bin, I vowed
to become a novelist.

Or something else. Nice work.

Tired of writing an unending love poem
on the shredded pre-kindling that
fills my recycling bin, I vowed to
become a novelist.

Yes that does read smoother - line breaks have never been my forte (I'm still trying to find it ). Thanks