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[John Galt]

AJ, good piece, I liked the use of "round" for the van-halen lover.

I especially liked the verse below, it brought a smile to my face to say you "enjambed" her to the edge of a cliff, and I liked that you left "cliff" at the end of the line. JG

There’s this girl I’ve exhausted with metaphors
and enjambed to the edge of a cliff
yet no lofty ode could satisfy what I wish to express
about the poison and the cure provided by her eyes.