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07-26-2014, 03:25 AM

(07-25-2014, 06:40 PM)poe Wrote: I agree you should take out the 3rd stanza. I really enjoyed this piece. That doesn't happen much. Keep writing new stuff. Let this one sit for a while. Anyway, I think its pretty much done.
Best wishes,
poe

Thank you! Hope you enjoyed the new edits.

"Where there are roses we plant doubt.
Most of the meaning we glean is our own,
and forever not knowing, we ponder."

-Fernando Pessoa

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Currently Untitled - by ajcohen613 - 07-25-2014, 09:23 AM

RE: Currently Untitled - by Tiger the Lion - 07-25-2014, 10:05 AM

RE: Currently Untitled - by ajcohen613 - 07-25-2014, 01:56 PM

RE: Currently Untitled - by Erthona - 07-25-2014, 03:10 PM

RE: Currently Untitled - by ajcohen613 - 07-25-2014, 03:13 PM

RE: Currently Untitled - by billy - 07-25-2014, 05:16 PM

RE: Currently Untitled - by ajcohen613 - 07-25-2014, 06:14 PM

RE: Currently Untitled - by poe - 07-25-2014, 06:40 PM

RE: Currently Untitled - by ajcohen613 - 07-26-2014, 03:25 AM

RE: Currently Untitled - by John Galt - 07-27-2014, 03:12 AM

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