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Currently Untitled

poe

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07-25-2014, 06:40 PM

I agree you should take out the 3rd stanza. I really enjoyed this piece. That doesn't happen much. Keep writing new stuff. Let this one sit for a while. Anyway, I think its pretty much done.
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Currently Untitled - by ajcohen613 - 07-25-2014, 09:23 AM

RE: Currently Untitled - by Tiger the Lion - 07-25-2014, 10:05 AM

RE: Currently Untitled - by ajcohen613 - 07-25-2014, 01:56 PM

RE: Currently Untitled - by Erthona - 07-25-2014, 03:10 PM

RE: Currently Untitled - by ajcohen613 - 07-25-2014, 03:13 PM

RE: Currently Untitled - by billy - 07-25-2014, 05:16 PM

RE: Currently Untitled - by ajcohen613 - 07-25-2014, 06:14 PM

RE: Currently Untitled - by poe - 07-25-2014, 06:40 PM

RE: Currently Untitled - by ajcohen613 - 07-26-2014, 03:25 AM

RE: Currently Untitled - by John Galt - 07-27-2014, 03:12 AM

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