Riding (Ed. .001Mercedes and ajcohen613)
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(07-25-2014, 06:18 AM)just mercedes Wrote:  Ouch! I think the title does a lot of work here - do you really need the last line?
I agree. Also, I think "sixteen year-old" would be the proper way to say it here, which I realize is picky of me to point out but I just felt compelled to do so.
"Where there are roses we plant doubt.
Most of the meaning we glean is our own,
and forever not knowing, we ponder."

-Fernando Pessoa
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RE: …a good day to die - by just mercedes - 07-25-2014, 06:18 AM
RE: …a good day to die - by ajcohen613 - 07-25-2014, 09:18 AM
RE: …a good day to die - by Erthona - 07-25-2014, 12:20 PM



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