Stones

[Tiger the Lion]

"..crescent smiles-at leaping cows, he humors our myths, through cumulus blinking, and the static of space." Nice images and spin on ideas.
"shit fog and shittier smog."-theses lines stink up a beautiful poem. Couldn't you come up with a more creative (poetic) description of fog and smog?
Otherwise, I liked this piece.
Thanks.

Thanks for reading and commenting Poe. The observation about the fog/smog line is interesting because I think you're right. The line has never changed since the first scribbling of this. I was always happy with the meaning but now I agree with you that the "shit" is uglier texture than needed. Full credit when I get to a rewrite.
Sincere thanks. - Paul