Caps
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I like the short poem it passes on to the reader an image of a memory, caps being childlike, little brother in glasses on summer days. My only nit would be I have never heard the phrase 'light off' for me it has always been 'let off' or 'set off' caps. Best Kieth

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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Caps - by Tiger the Lion - 07-22-2014, 09:43 AM
RE: Caps - by billy - 07-22-2014, 03:12 PM
RE: Caps - by Erthona - 07-22-2014, 03:19 PM
RE: Caps - by Tiger the Lion - 07-23-2014, 06:20 AM
RE: Caps - by John Galt - 07-23-2014, 06:40 AM
RE: Caps - by Tiger the Lion - 07-23-2014, 06:47 AM
RE: Caps - by ajcohen613 - 07-23-2014, 06:51 AM
RE: Caps - by John Galt - 07-23-2014, 07:01 AM
RE: Caps - by Tiger the Lion - 07-23-2014, 07:16 AM
RE: Caps - by John Galt - 07-23-2014, 04:41 PM
RE: Caps - by Keith - 07-23-2014, 07:57 AM
RE: Caps - by Dupuis - 07-29-2014, 03:01 AM



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