07-23-2014, 06:51 AM
(07-23-2014, 06:47 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Thanks John. My intent here was an attempt at ambiguity between past and present tenses. The word "could" is still a problem, I think.Maybe use the word "might" instead of "could" if it's bothering you. Just a thought. Just a thought.
Paul
"Where there are roses we plant doubt.
Most of the meaning we glean is our own,
and forever not knowing, we ponder."
-Fernando Pessoa
Most of the meaning we glean is our own,
and forever not knowing, we ponder."
-Fernando Pessoa