07-22-2014, 03:52 PM
ajcohen613,
I agree with Billy, but I'll take it a step further and say it is a Gothic Romance, in the form of poetry.
Shouldn't the first line read:
"There are rarely nights when my mind evades thoughts you,"
Unsure about the use of "cackle", too many connotations about the word to make it seem desirable.
Keep pluggin on,
Dale
I agree with Billy, but I'll take it a step further and say it is a Gothic Romance, in the form of poetry.
Shouldn't the first line read:
"There are rarely nights when my mind evades thoughts you,"
Unsure about the use of "cackle", too many connotations about the word to make it seem desirable.
Keep pluggin on,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.