The Bee

[KROD]

As observed, the bee seems the perfect servant,
traveling from one location to another.
Random, but somehow perfect,
appearing distracted yet always at work.

Living in that smaller world, to us,
we look down on them,
and receive their toil over breakfast toast,
or other parts of life which require sweetening.

Thinking ourselves better, because we can think.

[Image: http://latebreakingcatholic.files.wordpr...07/bee.jpg]

Hey, I'm not sure "as observed" is right here.(L1) I probably would add more to help with giving this piece more imagery. I like the idea you're going with here so help me "see" it better. Something about the last line that doesn't seem right but cant put my finger on it. Thanks for writing!