07-20-2014, 04:29 PM
(05-11-2014, 03:00 AM)Eugene_Moon Wrote: I do agree with Brownlie, your fragments man. If you just edit your lines a little bit, make sure you end with a complete thought, then it's just about perfect. Your rhyme and flow is very balanced, and word choice superior! Great work, you're very talented!Please read the poem that you are critting. Making observations which do not relate makes crit pointless. You say that rhyme is balanced. What rhyme? You say that that flow is balanced. What is flow? This is not to say that you are to be vilified for attempting crit but it must be VALID and not falsely generic.Please take this note as a general comment on all such crit.
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