07-13-2014, 12:00 PM
(07-05-2014, 09:49 PM)WordJunky Wrote: Listen real good'It's exciting and pace-y. Maybe add a little more line structure to help your readers hear not just what you're saying but to add levels. By combing some lists and lines you set up more opportunity for contrasting and comparing your concepts.
For better purpose,
Ignorance straightened curved learning,
Adding value to knowledge,
For not just those conscience
but
For those draped,
The misunderstanding,
Along with,
projectors of Dark Sided perception
Relevantly known as "tunnel visionaries"
or
Mirror effective's
Even,
Obsessive self reflectors.
Driven by;
Motivation,
Absorption,
And
Inclusive personal direction,
Irrelevance of the facts,
Cracks when slipped through
Fallacy cheerfully abducts,
Leaving Solo bereavement,
Grieving a personality
One less of tangent cross point.
Likewise in ignorance,
Observations hold true
In
Contempt contradiction,
Mind the narrow,
Thoughts filter out.
Personally
I lie with the world,
The world lies with me,
I lie to my fellows,
Holding onto these three,
Egotism, arrogance and hypocrisy,
hate those of minds free,
I fold to the blinded
Ignorance is my reality.
My thoughts aare one sided.

