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At Night
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07-09-2014, 02:29 AM
(07-09-2014, 12:28 AM)fogglethorpe Wrote: I can't add much to what Erthona said, except that this poem is marred by too many prepositional phrases. I counted over a dozen, which is a lot for a poem this short.Fogglethorpe, would you have a suggestion on how to get rid of some prepositions without disturbing the flow? |
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RE: At Night - by Erthona - 07-08-2014, 05:42 AM
RE: At Night - by Alexearth - 07-08-2014, 09:15 PM
RE: At Night - by bena - 07-09-2014, 07:44 AM
RE: At Night - by Alexearth - 07-10-2014, 06:45 AM
RE: At Night - by Erthona - 07-10-2014, 09:16 AM
RE: At Night - by Bohari Mohammad - 07-12-2014, 02:56 PM
RE: At Night - by aerickson - 08-12-2014, 05:11 AM
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