Good Morning (edit 1)
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(07-09-2014, 12:25 AM)ellajam Wrote:  
(07-09-2014, 12:01 AM)jdvanwijk Wrote:  
(07-08-2014, 11:57 PM)Erthona Wrote:  Well that is a vivid image, although I thought "pollack" was a fish. Does it have another meaning? Probably "God" shouldn't be capitalized.

Dale
Thanks for your feedback, Dale! Here it's intended as a self-invented verb, "to pollock something", i.e. to splatter something like Jackson Pollock did. Wink
Maybe capitalizing Pollock in stead of Earth might help, that's a lovely image I missed. I pictured being beaten with a fish, thinking it probably had a different but similar meaning. But I've got fishing on my mind anyway.Smile
Hello Ella, thank you for the idea! Though it wasn't intentional, I actually kind of like the dissonance of meaning that "pollocks" without a capital letter causes, but I'll give it some more thought! Smile
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Messages In This Thread
Good Morning (edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 07-08-2014, 05:20 PM
RE: Good morning (cinquian) - by ellajam - 07-08-2014, 11:06 PM
RE: Good Morning (edit) - by jdvanwijk - 07-08-2014, 11:15 PM
RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by ellajam - 07-08-2014, 11:28 PM
RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by Erthona - 07-08-2014, 11:57 PM
RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by jdvanwijk - 07-09-2014, 12:01 AM
RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by ellajam - 07-09-2014, 12:25 AM
RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by jdvanwijk - 07-09-2014, 02:03 AM
RE: Good Morning (edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 07-11-2014, 11:57 PM



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