Good Morning (edit 1)

Good Morning (edit 1)

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07-08-2014, 05:20 PM

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Already, sun and birdsong
splatter the walls: a wild

kid-god, stick in hand
pollocks the Earth!

Original (cinquain)

Already
sun and birdsong
splatter the walls: a wild
kid-god, stick in hand, pollocks
the Earth.

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Good Morning (edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 07-08-2014, 05:20 PM

RE: Good morning (cinquian) - by ellajam - 07-08-2014, 11:06 PM

RE: Good Morning (edit) - by jdvanwijk - 07-08-2014, 11:15 PM

RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by ellajam - 07-08-2014, 11:28 PM

RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by Erthona - 07-08-2014, 11:57 PM

RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by jdvanwijk - 07-09-2014, 12:01 AM

RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by ellajam - 07-09-2014, 12:25 AM

RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by jdvanwijk - 07-09-2014, 02:03 AM

RE: Good Morning (edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 07-11-2014, 11:57 PM

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