07-05-2014, 04:49 PM
(07-05-2014, 04:29 PM)Anonymous Wrote:Good egg,Quote: Interestingly personal interpretation of the lucid dream problem....and it is a problem. Dreams rarely lead to great insights and are often better stated factually, if you get my meaning. Conceptually, you challenge yourself in an arena littered with dead poetsFrankly, and because of the foregone, you stuck a conclusion on to the end which evades logic.
Could I suggest.
But on the wall I spotted a tome,
"Note. Get a cabbage on the way home."
Best,
tectak
Thanks for the response! And I liked your suggestion of the tome and chuckled at the satirical line below it. I got an ambivalent feeling from your post on whether you liked it, so I hope you enjoyed it! I am not aware of a dead poet, unless you mean a literal dead poet. Maybe I'm confused because there is a club at my school called the 'Dead Poets Society;' all they do is discuss overhyped literature.
Likeability is a little too pedestrian for this site

A higher function of crit, putting it pedantically, is improvement; assuming nothing is perfect, including the crit.Since you ask, I find it difficult to like without light and I was in the dark most, if not all, of the time with this one

The dead poets. Not complicated. Many before you have tried to make poetry from the dream experience. Drugs, drink, dehydration and delirium sem to be the four-D descriptors which lead them to poetic oblivion and metaphorical death. My advice? Don't go there until you are on your deathbed...then who can argue?
Best,
tectak

