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[Erthona]

Thanks Brownlie,

I will consider that. I had meant by "different ways they fall" as how their bodies end up, some on their backs, some on their sides, some as though they are still walking. They also literally fall off the ceiling and off the wall. Maybe I could replace:

"Still they fall,
in the bath or in the hall"

-with-

"Still they fall,
off the ceiling off the walls..."

Thanks for your comments,


Dale