dead antennas wave goodbye edit .01-Paul
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Thanks Paul,

Yes, I think "or" works better, and I might make L7-8 parenthetical, or inclose with em dashes.

Thanks again for your comments,

Dale
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RE: dead antennas wave goodbye - by Erthona - 07-02-2014, 06:10 AM



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