06-30-2014, 04:17 PM
This actually reads pretty clearly to me (grammatical correction not withstanding), as my family were farmers. So it is obvious that the twenty thousand strong, is referring to bales of hay, which will be placed in the large barn that the last bale from the previous harvest was just taken from. The birds roost in the barn, and as morning approaches begin to make their individual sounds which is amplified by the tin roof and the emptiness of the barn.
One suggestion "is this rejoicing at the defeat of darkness." -->"is a rejoicing at the defeat of darkness. "
Dale
One suggestion "is this rejoicing at the defeat of darkness." -->"is a rejoicing at the defeat of darkness. "
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.