06-28-2014, 06:41 AM
"When the space becomes tight,
That's as far as I'll go with the line by line. This poem seems primarily predicated on rhymes, with more or less nonsensical lines thrown in between to either take up space or appear profound, when they are not. Either that or the writer has some actual idea in his head, but doesn't know how to clearly express it.
Dale
That's as far as I'll go with the line by line. This poem seems primarily predicated on rhymes, with more or less nonsensical lines thrown in between to either take up space or appear profound, when they are not. Either that or the writer has some actual idea in his head, but doesn't know how to clearly express it.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.