03-29-2010, 04:20 PM
nope , the spelling wasn't intentional at all lol.
i'm on my ex's pc which doesn't have a spell checker and i rushed a few poems off in order to change the forums a little. (not rushed exactly, more an edit of some old ones in the poetry draw. )
thanks for fecund.
when i say the fields grow hunger. i'm trying to show that they no longer feed the people. i'll have a re-think about it jd
not that an explanation should help. if it's not clear it's not clear.
in the couplet i'm trying to describe how the soil was stripped from the earth in a poetic fashion...i may have failed
never worry about giveing honest feedback jd.
i really appreciate it.
i'm also far from being some poet whose good enough to intentionally add a flaw thats so good it really looks like a flaw that was put there by accident lol.
you have to be able to ride a bike in order to hold it steady for someone else to ride.
i'm on my ex's pc which doesn't have a spell checker and i rushed a few poems off in order to change the forums a little. (not rushed exactly, more an edit of some old ones in the poetry draw. )
thanks for fecund.
when i say the fields grow hunger. i'm trying to show that they no longer feed the people. i'll have a re-think about it jd
not that an explanation should help. if it's not clear it's not clear.
in the couplet i'm trying to describe how the soil was stripped from the earth in a poetic fashion...i may have failed
never worry about giveing honest feedback jd.
i really appreciate it.
i'm also far from being some poet whose good enough to intentionally add a flaw thats so good it really looks like a flaw that was put there by accident lol.
you have to be able to ride a bike in order to hold it steady for someone else to ride.