06-18-2014, 04:45 AM
Chris and John. Thank you for reading and making some great suggestions. I don't take this piece too seriously, but someone posted a poem about manic depression the other day so I dug this one out of the closet. I like the concrete/center aligned idea. Been shuffling words around ever since. Some of the "small" words are a function of the rhythm I want, so I'm a bit careful with them. I need it to remain one long sentence because at the end of it I am trying to cue the reader "to take a deep breath"
I hope that makes some sense. Thanks again guys. - Paul
I hope that makes some sense. Thanks again guys. - Paul