06-17-2014, 06:59 AM
First edit. Thx to Chris/John/Billy ---Still struggling. Feels like putting a seat belt on a gnat. 
Winded edit#1
Deflating yet celebrating
the manic time
that was
our yesterday.
Now every day
is yesterday
because
I won't deflate entirely,
while you inspire me
to take
a deep
breath.
Trying to figure out how to package this.
Winded
Deflating and yet celebrating
the manic time, that was
just yesterday, and every day
is yesterday, because
I won't deflate entirely,
not while you still inspire me to
take
a deep
breath.
Winded edit#1
Deflating yet celebrating
the manic time
that was
our yesterday.
Now every day
is yesterday
because
I won't deflate entirely,
while you inspire me
to take
a deep
breath.
Trying to figure out how to package this.
Winded
Deflating and yet celebrating
the manic time, that was
just yesterday, and every day
is yesterday, because
I won't deflate entirely,
not while you still inspire me to
take
a deep
breath.