Cigarette Smoke
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Tectak - I haven't been on the site in a while, but I've posted two poems and have commented on quite a few more than that.

As far as your critique goes, I appreciate it. I admit, I don't know a ton about haiku's, so I'll definitely take some time and familiarize myself. Thanks


Erthona - I appreciate the critique. Expanding the poem may be the best thing to do. I'll strongly consider it. Thanks
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Cigarette Smoke - by nicksherman - 06-14-2014, 03:14 AM
RE: Cigarette Smoke - by tectak - 06-16-2014, 06:06 PM
RE: Cigarette Smoke - by nicksherman - 06-16-2014, 10:41 PM
RE: Cigarette Smoke - by Erthona - 06-16-2014, 07:20 PM



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