Fat Man
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(01-28-2014, 05:52 AM)Blake Wrote:  Sounds like an American love story.
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(01-29-2014, 11:36 AM)Zainabk Wrote:  I liked your poem but I was bothered with the picture you painted- very stereotypical.
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Messages In This Thread
Fat Man - by nicksherman - 01-28-2014, 03:09 AM
RE: Fat Man - by Blake - 01-28-2014, 05:52 AM
RE: Fat Man - by tectak - 06-16-2014, 10:14 PM
RE: Fat Man - by nicksherman - 01-29-2014, 02:56 AM
RE: Fat Man - by rowens - 01-29-2014, 07:34 AM
RE: Fat Man - by nicksherman - 01-29-2014, 11:31 AM
RE: Fat Man - by Zainabk - 01-29-2014, 11:36 AM
RE: Fat Man - by Veil of Trash - 01-29-2014, 02:36 PM
RE: Fat Man - by billy - 01-29-2014, 05:59 PM
RE: Fat Man - by LeoEvans - 06-24-2014, 01:49 AM
RE: Fat Man - by nicksherman - 06-24-2014, 05:42 AM
RE: Fat Man - by LeoEvans - 06-24-2014, 05:56 AM
RE: Fat Man - by LorettaYoung - 06-24-2014, 06:26 AM
RE: Fat Man - by John Galt - 06-24-2014, 06:48 AM
RE: Fat Man - by vagabond - 07-04-2014, 06:21 AM



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