06-13-2014, 09:33 AM
This seems more a questionnaire than a poem.
"Quatrains that encapsulate a single thought happen to be my specialty."
Who told you that?
Did you pay him money?
Did he know poetry?
Caveat emptor.
Did you ever contemplate using correct punctuation?
"Is darkness an old friend"
"Hello darkness my old friend" Paul Simon - "The sounds of Silence"
"Was there a time in life that you let your heart soar" trite/cliche
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"As the reader, why bother answering the question?
Quatrains that encapsulate a single thought happen to be my specialty."
Do you realize that doesn't answer the question?
Dale
"Quatrains that encapsulate a single thought happen to be my specialty."
Who told you that?
Did you pay him money?
Did he know poetry?
Caveat emptor.
Did you ever contemplate using correct punctuation?
"Is darkness an old friend"
"Hello darkness my old friend" Paul Simon - "The sounds of Silence"
"Was there a time in life that you let your heart soar" trite/cliche
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"As the reader, why bother answering the question?
Quatrains that encapsulate a single thought happen to be my specialty."
Do you realize that doesn't answer the question?
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.