06-12-2014, 11:14 PM
(06-12-2014, 01:02 PM)Cyferz Wrote: Have you known misery as many have before?darkness, misery, past, time, life, dream
Is darkness an old friend, kept buried in your past;
Was there a time in life that you let your heart soar
To find another dream, had smoldered into ash
these are all vague abstractions. poetry is built on concrete nouns.


