Critique
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Fry Daddy the misinterpretable, (yes, I know that's not a word, just go with it)

These days it seems harder and harder to find people who have a thick skin. Or perhaps I am just getting old and running out of patience for them to develop a thick skin. I used to be more patient i think, now I am just the patient.

At any rate, I sometimes defend points in my poems, but not very often. I don't understand though why some folks just can't take crit, ffs---it doesn't change their poem if they don't want it to, and if they can't grow they aren't grown up just let them stew in their own little head like I have to.

SG the fly on the wall
mayor of benaville, pop.1

PS am I actually commenting on the poem if i am discussing the content? I hope so. Would hate to get into trouble. The poem is great, btw. There. Take that, Rules. *shakes fist at the screen*
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Critique - by Erthona - 06-11-2014, 12:32 AM
RE: Critique - by Todd - 06-11-2014, 02:05 AM
RE: Critique - by Erthona - 06-11-2014, 02:14 AM
RE: Critique - by Tiger the Lion - 06-11-2014, 06:34 AM
RE: Critique - by ellajam - 06-11-2014, 06:50 AM
RE: Critique - by rayheinrich - 06-11-2014, 11:42 AM
RE: Critique - by ellajam - 06-11-2014, 10:40 PM
RE: Critique - by Erthona - 06-11-2014, 01:11 PM
RE: Critique - by bena - 06-11-2014, 10:28 PM
RE: Critique - by Erthona - 06-11-2014, 11:46 PM
RE: Critique - by ellajam - 06-12-2014, 12:44 AM
RE: Critique - by bena - 06-12-2014, 12:22 AM
RE: Critique - by Erthona - 06-12-2014, 09:56 AM
RE: Critique - by bena - 06-13-2014, 05:17 AM
RE: Critique - by loocerie - 07-09-2014, 11:33 PM
RE: Critique - by tectak - 07-10-2014, 12:00 AM
RE: Critique - by Erthona - 07-10-2014, 07:11 AM
RE: Critique - by Leanne - 07-10-2014, 10:03 AM
RE: Critique - by Erthona - 07-10-2014, 08:40 PM



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