06-11-2014, 11:03 AM
the long remnants of forgotten memories i remember
of friends, foes, all I remember, always a dying ember
I like the poem but these two lines I did not like. I feel like there is a better way to say what you are trying to say. I'm sure you already know this but capatalize the I's and what not.
of friends, foes, all I remember, always a dying ember
I like the poem but these two lines I did not like. I feel like there is a better way to say what you are trying to say. I'm sure you already know this but capatalize the I's and what not.