06-11-2014, 08:13 AM
As someone who was forced to go to church every weekend growing up, I can definitely relate to this. I like it for the most part, but I feel like there should be more. I get it, you're young and bored at church. Try to add something else. I have no idea what that would be, sorry I suck at critiquing, but this doesn't feel done to me.
I took coloring Jesus red as symbolism for his death. Not sure if I was right there. If you really want to show disinterest maybe talk about communion being snack time? Could be a bit of a cliche there though.
I do like this, which is why I took the time to comment on it, I just think it could be better. It's good the way it is, but it has the potential to be better
I took coloring Jesus red as symbolism for his death. Not sure if I was right there. If you really want to show disinterest maybe talk about communion being snack time? Could be a bit of a cliche there though.
I do like this, which is why I took the time to comment on it, I just think it could be better. It's good the way it is, but it has the potential to be better
I write what I see. Write to make it right, don't like where I be. I'd like to make it like the sights on TV. Quite the great life, so nice and easy.