It Arrives

[LorettaYoung]

Thanks for reading, though I have to disagree with most of what you wrote.

Im not a professional meteorologist, and neither are you, but we both knew what virga was.


Could you be more specific about the punctuation issues. Also, I meant came.

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Hi Q: I see the storm as a dominant metaphor for those seductive eyes; which I agree you should embellish. I think the "storm came"is correct and also sounds better. Otherwise, I enjoyed the read. Loretta