06-11-2014, 12:26 AM
It is not really clear that "mine bumping" is about your forehead. A bit of distraction to the read.
I do like the ending.
Dale
I do like the ending.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.