06-10-2014, 02:15 PM
I guess he's lucky to make it to 112 - he didn't freeze to death in the winter because he couldn't afford heating. These really are horror stories. Maybe we shouldn't live in other than temperate zones when we get old.
You don't think much of his neighbours, either.I do like your poem, and I think you can cut words from it to further tighten your voice. Is it anger or accusation? You make me feel guilty anyway, and I didn't know him.
You don't think much of his neighbours, either.I do like your poem, and I think you can cut words from it to further tighten your voice. Is it anger or accusation? You make me feel guilty anyway, and I didn't know him.