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06-09-2014, 06:55 AM
Thanks Grace, for reading and commenting. I agree, the piece might be one stanza too long. Sadly, if I were to part with one of them, it would be the one that you liked most. The 4th stanza is the weakest to me, but I need it to change direction into the last stanza. Even as it stands, S4 doesn't do as much for S5 as I'd like it to.
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