No Longer Dancing

No Longer Dancing

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#16

06-07-2014, 10:36 AM

This poem was good because it passed meaning that the reader could understand! 'A marriage can not waltz on a stiletto's edge.' A brilliant metaphor that I took to mean that two people need to be in a loving rhythm and not a series of tumultuous events. The only part I don't get is "On my terms final eve" -- ??
Good work.

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No Longer Dancing - by ChristopherSea - 05-21-2014, 08:24 PM

RE: No Longer Dancing - by ellajam - 05-21-2014, 09:48 PM

RE: No Longer Dancing - by ChristopherSea - 05-21-2014, 10:29 PM

RE: No Longer Dancing - by ellajam - 05-21-2014, 11:33 PM

RE: No Longer Dancing - by ChristopherSea - 05-22-2014, 12:53 AM

RE: No Longer Dancing - by LorettaYoung - 06-07-2014, 04:40 AM

RE: No Longer Dancing - by ellajam - 06-07-2014, 11:25 AM

RE: No Longer Dancing - by Brownlie - 05-22-2014, 03:05 AM

RE: No Longer Dancing - by ChristopherSea - 05-22-2014, 04:40 AM

RE: (edit 1) No Longer Dancing - by Brownlie - 05-22-2014, 02:43 PM