Ichabod's Waltz

[LorettaYoung]

First post - here's a piece I'm satisfied with.

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Two souls begin dancing,
Long everlasting,
With envious, masterful skill

The bodies of each
Make not such a peep
As they loiter on, quiet and still

But inside the mind
There’s no worry of time,
As shadows move swift and with thrill

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Hi Kmatrx: This is pleasant sounding; but some questions: you are referring to dead persons as souls? V1 and shadows V2. If they are "dancing long everlasting", and V3 "shadows move swift"; how can they be still (unless you mean quiet). My biggest question is in the sense you are using "soul" and "shadow". Aren't you speaking of ghosts? Best, Loretta