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[ellajam]

Never knew never known
a moments introspection
speak into a reflection
this insanity is yours to own.

You didn't say you weren't alright
Nothing left to do
words hung out and used
You shoved me 6 feet under too

The worlds stripped
sinking bereft
bare feet shuffle blindly
walk a mile in a crypt

Sink into the mire
ashes ashes we all fall down
hand in hand
I became the liar

Your Life's a hypnotizing blaze
fire burns through my veins
I am the torch
lighting the flame.

Hi, Pyxx, grief tinged with guilt comes through strong for me. I suggest you take each four lines, remove the cliches (sink into the mire, etc.) and try to present each image in a fresh way. And correct the typos (world's, etc.), you can make something of this, good luck.