Cotton Candy Sheep

Cotton Candy Sheep

Pyxx

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06-04-2014, 09:52 AM

(06-04-2014, 09:43 AM)rowens Wrote: I was just saying those are things to consider. Removing certain words. I thought it might sound better if you removed those that I pointed out. If you think so too then maybe I was right.

critiques appreciated ^-^

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Cotton Candy Sheep - by Pyxx - 06-04-2014, 09:00 AM

RE: Cotton Candy Sheep - by rowens - 06-04-2014, 09:19 AM

RE: Cotton Candy Sheep - by Pyxx - 06-04-2014, 09:33 AM

RE: Cotton Candy Sheep - by rowens - 06-04-2014, 09:37 AM

RE: Cotton Candy Sheep - by Pyxx - 06-04-2014, 09:40 AM

RE: Cotton Candy Sheep - by rowens - 06-04-2014, 09:43 AM

RE: Cotton Candy Sheep - by Pyxx - 06-04-2014, 09:52 AM

RE: Cotton Candy Sheep - by Sachelcharges - 06-04-2014, 04:52 PM

RE: Cotton Candy Sheep - by Pyxx - 06-04-2014, 04:55 PM

RE: Cotton Candy Sheep - by ChristopherSea - 06-04-2014, 07:16 PM

RE: Cotton Candy Sheep - by Pyxx - 06-04-2014, 10:04 PM

RE: Cotton Candy Sheep - by ellajam - 06-04-2014, 07:24 PM

RE: Cotton Candy Sheep - by tectak - 06-04-2014, 10:41 PM

RE: Cotton Candy Sheep - by Pyxx - 06-05-2014, 10:26 AM

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