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Cavelight
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06-02-2014, 08:07 AM
Hi, I like the imagery and rhythm of the first three verses, V4 seems confusing and contradictory; enduring ghosts suddenly frustrated; and how do ghosts fit in; is this about a cave; how does the bar fit; how does V5 relate to the topic. I do think you have something here to work with. Loretta
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Cavelight - by Tiger the Lion - 06-02-2014, 05:43 AM
RE: Cavelight - by LorettaYoung - 06-02-2014, 08:07 AM
RE: Cavelight - by ellajam - 06-02-2014, 08:21 AM
RE: Cavelight - by Tiger the Lion - 06-02-2014, 10:01 AM
RE: Cavelight - by just mercedes - 06-02-2014, 08:47 AM
RE: Cavelight - by Tiger the Lion - 06-09-2014, 06:55 AM
RE: Cavelight - by Wjames - 06-19-2014, 11:14 AM
RE: Cavelight - by Tiger the Lion - 06-24-2014, 12:28 PM
RE: Cavelight - by Keith - 06-25-2014, 06:02 AM
RE: Cavelight - by stajas - 06-25-2014, 12:50 PM
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