Better future

[Tiger the Lion]

Hello MT. I agree with Erthona's observations. If you find a rhythm in the first line you might find the whole piece coming together. The lowercase "i" never works, IMO. I've tried it myself and it always comes across as falsely modest. You almost need to exclude any capitalization just to hide it. There is an awful lot of metaphor available to your subject. Brainstorm as many as you can and do the weeding later, so to speak.

I have a plan to one day own
A land to reap what I have sown.....

I'm sure you'll find the right rhythm.