06-02-2014, 04:52 AM
TtL,
Starts off well, then "pregnant with moments and centuries". Are you trying to write for Hallmark or just like cliches.
Get's a little too preachy at the end.
As you have already explained it, it makes it difficult to critique further.
Best,
Dale
Starts off well, then "pregnant with moments and centuries". Are you trying to write for Hallmark or just like cliches.
Get's a little too preachy at the end.
As you have already explained it, it makes it difficult to critique further.
Best,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.