06-01-2014, 07:26 PM
Or maybe you should just open up even though it might seems akward to post, if Erthona is right about he's assumption. Sometimes you wanna withhold information that you think will lessen the amount of readers who understand or like it, when it's really it's often the oppisite that is the case. Or you could write something else first, giving something a little more personal and gain the comfort for opening up, or make something less personal also. I do find some parts confusing or just very unclear. I don't know what "i was not strong enough, i was allways smart enough" means. Parts like the start "I was never 13 in his eyes.... I was allways to old" i get the meaning of (or at least think i do) but most else seems strange to me. It's hard to wrap your mind around the sentence "the never of allways" i think