06-01-2014, 11:24 AM
(05-29-2014, 10:39 PM)expiring_touch Wrote: Spring scented lights I like the synesthesiaThe last glass of Merlot at lunch may have been a mistake. Please ignore this if you are having breakfast or supper.
fill up the sky, spill over wanted sound here to go with sight and scent
the roof into my glass -- m dash?
I’ve spilt myself all over
the pavement, too, 'spilt all over the pavement like?
red wine and all, shy nods, and all, shy nods - needed?
and obscene swirls
with a stranger. He tied
red leather bracelets
to my wrists love the particular 'red' but two 'reds' close together
before I disappeared
back to the twilight.
I’ve never realized
how loud it can be - could be?
the strike of keys the ... of ... is a construction I hate
on the piano.
Your hands
along the
seams,
undoing I like that the punctuation has vanished here
