Undoing

[QDeathstar]

Spring scented lights
fill up the sky, spill over
the roof into my glass --
I’ve spilt myself all over
the pavement, too,
red wine and all, shy nods, I really love this first sentence, the way shifts across different objects, so smoothly.
and obscene swirls
with a stranger. He tied
red leather bracelets
to my wrists
before I disappeared
back to the twilight. Is the speaker an escort? I ask because the speaker says "stranger" and there is just a bit of kink, then the speaker disappears back into twilight... Was that the intent?
I’ve never realized
how loud it can be -
the strike of keys
on the piano.
Your hands
along the
seams,
undoing mmm, that is so sexy. I also like the lack of punctuation, it adds to the undoing, imo.

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Also, i agree that spilt is fine.