05-31-2014, 04:58 AM
Maybe some Valproic acid and some left justify would be of benefit. Also perhaps if written in first person it would read more clearly. (Just an example, not a suggestion)
I fight the blackness consuming my mind,
as erosion seeps through the cracks of my mangled soul:
worthless exhaustion.
Do I give in and embrace the ecstasy;
spiraling into the vibrant altered-reality that has
no limits to the capabilities of my newly enlightened mind.
I feel invulnerable;
Mania.
Best,
Dale
I fight the blackness consuming my mind,
as erosion seeps through the cracks of my mangled soul:
worthless exhaustion.
Do I give in and embrace the ecstasy;
spiraling into the vibrant altered-reality that has
no limits to the capabilities of my newly enlightened mind.
I feel invulnerable;
Mania.
Best,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.